First:
Pretty good content, and defiantly a great start. I really liked the list of good things and bad things. I would have enjoyed seeing more links to the words. To accomplish what he wanted to do it was suggested that he use div tags with png transparent rectangles in it.
Also suggested to take the links he used to more interesting things. Like the best facebook pages, ect.
Second:
Text was all over the page with each new page. That was pleasant. The color scheme is good. However, given the nature of the project, having the links blend makes it not obvious to click. It was suggested to give the link a background color instead of just having the text change color. Useful. Given that the piece was mostly about time travel and decisions. Someone also suggested that having it all on one page, would fit like a puzzle together. Varying Style of text. Color, font, ect.
Third:
Cash Money! I like the message and vision. The color scheme is simple and fresh. And the links are obvious and simple. A semi-opaque rescript in the background. Formatting it like an ATM. "Do you agree" bits?
Mine: ad-hoc.zzl.org
- Change background to something not plain/ more tech background.
- Android pic/ robots somewhere.
- Robot head as the background.
- Cellphone pic as background.
- Have text read by microsoft sam. Via quicktime file, ect.
- Make them all pop up in new windows.
- Tying the colors to subject.
- Consistence person/tense. I spoke neutral then first person.
Fifth:
Different colors for each topic, some relating to each topic. ie. dark grey for negative, green for help our earth.
Sixth:
Graphics were useful in illustrating what is said. Many questions posed, vs constant speech. There was a lack of overall consistent layout of the entire site.
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